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Vampire Wings Chapter 1
Name: N/A
Date: 3/17/2009
Comment: nice story
the plot looks good
Author's Comment: Thanks, it starts out a little slow but I think you will enjoy the next chapters even more :)
Vampire Wings Prologue
Name: N/A
Date: 3/18/2009
Comment: I found it most
provocative that you have a caring vampire. Makes me curious for
more. VERY GOOD JOB!
Author's Comment: Aziral
isn't a typical vampire, I really didn't think about it at first but I wanted a good foil for Dillon's rashness and passionate personality.
Vampire Wings Chapter 1
Name: N/A
Date: 3/18/2009
Comment: Hoping for more
action but I can only imagine the build up now.Your
perspective veiw only confuses to
the point of arousal.
Author's Comment: No sex in the opening chapters :( but I promise the next one will make up for it!
Vampire Wings Chapter 1
Name: Ryn
Date: 3/18/2009
Comment: How is it that I
love everything you write? Brian sounds adorably
fuckable. Steve sounds delicious and Dillon sounds like
total eye candy. I cant wait to find out what happens
next. When will the vampire and Dillon meet again? Will
there be any smex between them? Between Dillon and Steve? Dillon and
Brian? Steve and Brian?
Author's Comment: Lot of sex coming up :P along with the pretty vampire.
Vampire Wings Chapter 1
Name: kerryannh
Date: 3/24/2009
Comment: I really like this beginning story. Of course I am very curious about Dillons relationship with the old hag. I am also eager to see him run into the vampire again. I like the fact that Dillon is a strong and willing uke and not some helpless victim.
Author's Comment: Dillon is
an experiment for me. I seem a pharse once "My uke can
kick your seme's ass" and that is what helped to inspire Dillon's rough persona :)
Vampire Wings Chapter 2
Name: NA
Date: 3/28/2009
Comment: ASTOUNDING! MORE! Actually that was very good indeed.The part where dillion asks for more got me.
Author's Comment: I think
the sex scenes in this story turned out amazingly well. I
think they are probably some of the best that I have done. I don't know
if it is because it is a vampire story or because of
my work on the PWP scene but I didn't have any trouble writing them :)
Vampire Wings Chapter 2
Name: Ryn
Date: 3/28/2009
Comment:
KKYYYAAAAA!!! This was awesome. I like how Aziral
essentially bought Dillon from Sarah. And then theres the smex... x) I honestly think this is probably the most interesting story here at yaoidesigns and thats saying something since EVERYthing is so much fun to read and Im always desperately waiting for the next chapter to find out what happens next.
Author's Comment: I'm really glad
you enjoyed this one :) Luckily this is one of those stories
I finished in a few days so all of it will be posted soon XD
Vampire Wings Chapter 2
Name: NA
Date: 3/28/2009
Comment: ASTOUNDING! MORE! Actually that was very good indeed.The part where dillion asks for more got me.
Author's Comment: I think
the sex scenes in this story turned out amazingly well. I
think they are probably some of the best that I have done. I don't know
if it is because it is a vampire story or because of
my work on the PWP scene but I didn't have any trouble writing them :)
Vampire Wings Chapter 3
Name: N/a
Date: 3/30/2009
Comment: The emotion is what has kept me going. Well that and my love of vampires.This story is based on a songs lyrics is quite a testament to your creativity.I have never thought of a song and gone there is a good story.You have kept me entertained once more.
Author's Comment: My
problem was narrowing down which song I wanted to do. I
have about five stories based on songs :) I chose this
one because I really wanted to try a vampire piece. The
other options was a bad boy hooker, an angel, a painter, and a
stalker XD
Vampire Wings Chapter 4
Name: N/a
Date: 4/1/2009
Comment: So excellant the
ending! I presume (correctly I hope) that evenually you
will return to these characters. Not killing off Aziral was the best way to end this story. I have read a lot of your work and this is by far the one that captivated me the most. Made twilight tame in the love department and where devotion is concerned.
Author's Comment: I don't
know if I will revist it or not. There are so many other
stories calling to me :) but it is always an option
since I didn't kill of
Azrial :)
