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Mirrored Attraction Chapter 1
Name: N/A
Date: 6/16/2009
Comment: I like this very much,
but it definately
needs a beta :)
Author's Comment: I'm glad you
enjoyed it despite its mistakes XD I have found a beta for this
story so hopefully it will be more enjoyable to read.
Mirrored Attraction Chapter 1
Name: Thaliya
Date: 6/17/2009
Comment: this is a really good start for a story, id
love to read
more of it :)
Author's Comment: Two more
chapter :) I will be posting them over the course of a this
month so there shouldn't be to much of a wait
;)
Mirrored Attraction Chapter 1
Name: graveyardstalkr
Date:6/18/2009
Comment:I use a similar musical
approach in a story once so great minds think alike:) I dont
think you could do a better job of not portraying sex while I felt
that was the underlying tone. But then
isnt sex the
underlying tone for life?
Author's Comment: I think
Jin would agree to that :D I feel in a lot of ways I stayed
from the inital concept of the story but I think in the end it is
better for it. I have to say it was really hard not including
sex within this story my mind tends to go in that direction without
me realizing it :P
Mirrored Attraction Chapter 2
Name: graveyardstalkr
Date:7/11/2009
Comment:Would have been a VERY
strong 4!But now I understand what someone was saying about my story
when they said it was good but that the spelling distracted from the
story. All in all the story in itself was definetly a 4 and Ayako
was for me what made the story all that more interesting even though
your buildup when to dai on jins throat
was exciting to
say the least. :)
Author's
Comment: Ayako is a fun character to write. I wish she had a
bigger part of the story, but I was really trying to make this
a SHORT story :P
Mirrored Attraction Chapter 2
Name: DarkGold
Date:7/26/2009
Comment:Very good
story - looking
forward to reading more.
Author's Comment: I'm glad you enjoyed this story :) One
more chapter to go.
