Reviews for Dragon Boy
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Dragon Boy Chapter 12
Name: Nate
Date: 6/8/2008
Comment: absolutely beautiful
Author's Comment: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter it was really fun to write Marek's return.


Dragon Boy Chapter 5
Name: Vicki
Date: 8/7/2008
Comment: wow! very good! I usually don't like harem stories this is really different though and you actually update! le gasp! It's very unique and I like your writing style. Awesome!
Author's Comment: I'm not as good at updating as I should be the call of anime distracts me sometimes but I do try.  I'm glad you are enjoying the stories and I'm grateful for all your comments and support.


Dragon Boy Chapter 7
Name: Vicki
Date: 8/7/2008
Comment: *chuckle* this story is just full of surprises, isn't it? Very good though. I completely caught up in the story. Tris is a cute little thing and has good taste.lol. great job1
Author's Comment: This story is one of the few that has undergone tremendous changes from the original story line I had but I think it is richer, more complex because of it. 


Dragon Boy Chapter 9
Name: Vicki
Date: 8/7/2008
Comment: ahhhh. poor Tir and being put in the middle of the two. I hope all works out. the poor thing. I thik he can bring the two together though.
Author's Comment: I usually don’t write threesomes because I think in a lot of ways they are unattainable yet surprisingly in this story I find it is working out rather well. Drake and Marek make for interesting partners by themselves but add in Tir and thing seem to get even more interesting.


Dragon Boy Chapter 11
Name: Vicki
Date: 8/7/2008
Comment: I thik Tir took some of her pain by the bond they have. poor things is feeling the same eggects as Drake, but no one realizes it. Happy to see a more friendly/fatherly king.
Author's Comment: The King is one of my favorite side characters to write.  I wish I had more of a place for him in the story. 


Dragon Boy Chapter 13
Name: Vicki
Date: 8/7/2008
Comment: interesting!!!! It seems to be working out rather nicely all around. I'm interested about Feras though. Did he explain that tir can communicate with them or something else?
Author's Comment: Feras and Ebony are both still keeping secrets but chapter 14 will explain alot around why.


Dragon Boy Chapter 13
Name: Vicki
Date: 8/7/2008
Comment: It was a little disappointing that he didn't get a dragon, but there would be too many complications if he did. What would happen when his own dragon wanted to mate and he was forced to go with another partner. It's easier this way and there may still be a unique way for him to get a dragon. great job and can't wait for more!!!! :)
Author's Comment: I know many people will cheering for Tir to get a dragon and it was a big disappointment for some. Chapter 14 will explain the real reason why Tir wasn’t chosen and also add a few more surprises.


Dragon Boy Chapter 14
Name: Ryn
Date: 8/20/2008
Comment: Tir is now a marquis!! OMG it just keeps getting better. I can't wait to find out how Tir's real father reacts to the news though. Maybe Tir could adopt his little brothers and bring them to his new lands or something. That would be awesome (though the story's awesome anyway). Please continue.Ganbatte!!Ryn
Author's Comment: I’m really looking forward to writing Tir’s meeting with his father. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.


Dragon Boy Chapter 14
Name: Mira Watanabe Date: 8/31/2008
Comment: OMG! I really enjoyed reading this story. It is really intreging, and uniqe! I really love dragons, add on a Harlem boy and a threesome, HOLY F*CK!!! You're my new idol! X3
Author's Comment:  I think this is probably a lot of people's favorite story. I started out to be a harem story but it has evolved into so much more.


Dragon Boy Chapter 15
Name: darrena Date: 8/31/2008
Comment: Brilliant chapter!!! I enjoyed reading it very much. Ebony being able to speak with Tir was a very lovely surprise :), and her story was fascinating. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Comment: This chapter was a really hard one to write since it had a lot of back story to it.  I was concerned it would be to boring since it was so long but I'm glad that you liked it.


Dragon Boy Chapter 13
Name: adry
Date: 9/2/2008
Comment: I missed this story, I missed it so much.Esper and Sasha were reworded so good. Don't kill why not cut out his toung and arms and chain in the harem.Or cut out his toung, break his spine (so he can't use his arms and legs ) and chain him in the harem.As an example for everyone.
Author's Comment: Messy, very messy and it might disturb any patrons entering the harem. Esper wasn't a turn on when he's whole let alone hanging as decorations. Still I feel the anger, the man is truly slim.


Dragon Boy Chapter 14
Name: adry
Date: 9/2/2008
Comment: "Very well, Tir you are now formally named..." did he realy ge the title? the ceremoby was not finished.
Author's Comment: Yep, despite the interruption his is now a marquis, and will have to deal with the title despite the fact he didn't get a hatchling.
Dragon Boy Chapter 16
Name: zsfantasy
Date: 9/21/2008
Comment: "Another great chapter!!!  I have to agree with Tir on his way of dealing with Sasha, the big softie.  :)  .
Author's Comment:  Although it will proably get him into trouble :)
Dragon Boy Chapter 16
Name: Ryn
Date: 9/22/2008
Comment: "OMG!! That was an awesome chapter. It was very funny at the end though. I am glad to see that Esper got what he deserved. Although I think Sasha's a reall 'B', I'm still glad to see she's leaving. I can't wait for Marek's reaction though. Thats going to be very fun to read. Please do update soon. Ganbatte!!Ryn
Author's Comment:  Most of the time the women in my stories tend to be sympathic and helpful.  Sasha was the first one to really be a pain in the ass.  This pretty much wraps up her part in the story.
Dragon Boy Chapter 17
Name: Date: 10/20/2008
Comment: great chapter
Author's Comment:  Thanks it was a easy chapter to write :)
Dragon Boy Chapter 17
Name: zsfantasy Date: 10/20/2008
Comment: I LOVE this story, especially your characterization of Marek...by the end of the chapter you just want to reach out and give him  a big hug!  I cant wait to read more about the bond between the dragons and Tir, and of course the plot thickens with Tristen (to bond or not to bond...that is the question).  Once again you did an excellent job and I cant wait to read more!
Author's Comment:   Lots of things are going on with Tir, he has a lot to deal with.  I'm really looking forward to writitng the coming chapters. 


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: Midnights Scream Date: 11/8/2008
Comment: lol. Go Drake and his awesomeness. I dont really like that he has kids though.
Author's Comment:   It would be a problem for the crown prince not to have children since I doubt Tir is going to get pregnant any time soon :P Don't worry Jin and Jasmine are harmless.


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: zsfantasy Date: 11/8/2008

Comment: I LOVE your writing.  I am enjoying the developing bond between Marek and Drake and I love how confuse Marek is about Tir.  Though I dont think the plan that Drake is coming up with will sit well with Tir, I cant wait to read about.

Thanks for the great chapter and look forward to many more!

Author's Comment:   I have a feeling the next chapter is going to be really fun to write.  I think it is about time for Marek and Drake to team up together.


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: Danni Date: 11/9/2008
Comment:Oh what a horrible place to leave us! Update soon please!!!!!
Author's Comment:   I will try my best XD 


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: z Date: 11/9/2008
Comment:Thank you for updating!!!
Author's Comment:   Your welcome, I'm sorry it takes me so long to update sometime.


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: BlaknSnow Date: 11/12/2008
Comment: This is a great story I love Marek hes cool but why did you stop there? *cry* 
please update soon
Author's Comment:   Marek out of all my character's has gone through the most change except for maybe Sunhawk. He has been a very interesting character to write, and he part in the story has gradually changed from what I ordinally intended. I stopped there to torture my readers, I’m the closest to Marek in personality after all :D I will try my best to update as soon as I can.


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: Alterian Date: 11/16/2008
Comment: Oh I love this story and adore its characters, dragons and humans alike.
I cant wait for more to come!!
Author's Comment:   This is the most popular story I have written.  I think it has to do alot with the dragons.  Hopefully you will contiune to enjoy it. ;)


Dragon Boy Chapter 18
Name: Date: 12/12/2008
Comment: very good
Author's Comment:   I'm glad you liked this fun chapter :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 20
Name: zsfantasy Date: 1/10/2009

Comment: Yay, we finally get to meet Tirs father...who wasnt smart enough to have support (maybe he recklessly thought he had enough power).

I am glad to see that Tristan appeared happy to see Tir, though the frown has me wondering what he is seeing...

Thanks for the great chapter and I look forward to more!

Author's Comment:   Tristan just didn't have someone to support him, since he doesn't have a dragon and he is the only one in his country trying to expand his magical powers.  He is rather reckless trying to use his powers without fully understanding him though.  He is really going to be a fun character to write.


Dragon Boy Chapter 20
Name: rebekahalana Date: 1/11/2009
Comment: *blinks*
He knew his son had been sold ...
Author's Comment:   The explanation for this will come in the next chapter :) but yes he knew and was looking for Tir.  Needless to say he isn't very happy and things with Tir's family are unexpected.


Dragon Boy Chapter 20
Name: Ryn Date: 1/11/2009
Comment: I WANNA CRY!!!! Its going to be hell waiting for the nextchapter<wails>.  Oh what is going on!? How does Tristan know about Tir being sold!? Has something happened to Tirs brothers? I going to keep my fingers crossed and pray that the next chapter comes soon! <cries in despair>
Author's Comment:   It is kind of a cliffhanger.  I'm really excited about the coming chapters of this story and have been looking forward to writing them:) 


Dragon Boy Chapter 20
Name: RuHNa Date: 2/5/2009
Comment: Im looking forward to the next chapter. hope you update soon. I dont usually comment on a story but this captured my interest and I really like it. : )
Author's Comment:  I'm glad you are enjoying Dragon Boy, it seems to be a favorite story for a lot of people. Unfortunately I'm only able to update each story once a month but I am trying get a little better.


Dragon Boy Chapter 21
Name: N/A Date: 2/7/2009
Comment: please more soon!!!
Author's Comment:  I will try my best :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 20
Name: Karea Date: 2/11/2009
Comment: Hey there is an update here! Since you updated it on your site will you ever update it on arinn cause i know there are a lot of people who like to read it?! Well even if you dont i found your site so i can just use this site instead.(:
Author's Comment:   I post chapter updates here and then a week later post them at arrinfantasy and adultfanfiction. It gives people a little incentive to come check out the site and explore around. There is a lot of neat art and I do keep a few stories for here only, to check out :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 20
Name: darrena Date: 3/4/2009
Comment: Brilliant story!!! Im sooo looking forward to the next chapter :) Poor Elgin and Ash... I cant wait to read their story.
Author's Comment:   Right now Ash and Elgin won't be a huge part of the story but after I finish Dragon Boy the sequal to it will feature them along with Drake's children, so they won't be going any where :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 22
Name: na Date: 3/8/2009
Comment: great chapter
Author's Comment:   Thank you I'm really glad you liked it. 


Dragon Boy Chapter 22
Name: Kyoura Date: 3/9/2009
Comment: Another brilliant chapter! I especially like Elgins protectiveness of Tir. That made me smile. Keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Comment:   Elgin is a fun character to write, since he acts like the big tough kid but is still young enough to want someone to protect him as well. 


Dragon Boy Chapter 23
Name: Oni-Kitsune Date: 4/21/2009
Comment: Having fallen in love with this story i was waiting with baited breath for this chapter and it smashes my expectations in to the ground!! It is a deeply relationship driven chapter which subtly shows the emerging webs that link each character.
I can’t wait to see King Nolan develop or what the Queen will inevitably scheme plus I am sure that Marek will make good on his threats to Tir :P
All round a fantastic chapter!!
Although i understand perfection is clearly your calling have pity and update the next chapter soon the torment of waiting is both exquisite and excruciating.
Yours dutiful ficphile
Oni~K    xx
Author's Comment:   This is the most complex story that I have ever worked on.  There are a lot of various threads to the story that are now coming into play so the following chapters should be very exciting :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 23
Name: Trudy aka tutyfrty Date: 4/26/2009
Comment: just visited your redone site and it looks great. This story is very interesting.I am looking forward to the next chapter. Good writing
Author's Comment:   I had to revamp the site since the stories where getting far to long for the old site to handle.  It seems like I've been working on Dragon Boy forever but things are moving along slowly :)  Glad to see you stopped by :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 24
Name: Jen Date: 6/4/2009
Comment: I love this story! So good! I cant wait to see what happens next. Please update soon! =]
Author's Comment:  Thank you.  I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story it is really fun to write.


Dragon Boy Chapter 24
Name: whitewizard Date: 6/9/2009
Comment: Wow, this is a truly great story, I read whats been done so far over the course of about three days and I cant wait for more! In the meantime Ill be checking out some of your other stories. Great stuff, practically novel-quality.
Author's Comment: Dragon Boy has grown a lot since I first started it.  It is one of the stories I hope to one day polish and turn into a book.


Dragon Boy Chapter 25
Name: Daoryn Date:7/11/2009
Comment: I really like the story and the characters you created.
I am looking forward to the next chapter really much!
I absolutely want to hug the twins, poor little sods...
The only thing I dont like is, that especially in the older chapters, there are quite some spelling mistakes that make reading a bit difficult and less fluid (for me as a non-native speaker)
But that is just a really small thing that happens to all of us =)
Just go on writing because the story is really great.
Author's Comment:  Spelling has always been my downfall :(  I do have a beta but things still slip through.  Hopefully it doesn't distract too much.


Dragon Boy Chapter 26
Name: kerryannh Date:8/3/2009
Comment: Loved this chapter. I am glad that Tir is spending time with his father finally. His dad seems to have the gift of making problems seem easier to solve. I think Tristan confessing that he enjoyed some bondage was great for Tir to hear. Maybe that will help him and Marek to talk and make up big time. Of course I love Marek with all his difficulties
Author's Comment:  Tristan is a rather interesting character since he seems kind of uptight but turns out to be more relaxed the more you get to know him. He is a side character that really deserves a bonus story done with him although it wouldn't be a yaoi one since his is straight XD


Dragon Boy Chapter 26
Name: Anelir Date:8/5/2009
Comment: Yay! New chapter! ^^ I like Tristan, hes cool XD Damn Marek better get his ass together ><
Author's Comment:  Marek is what you call a high maintenance partner.  He is fun in bed but takes a lot of patients to deal with ;)  I think he's worth it though.


Dragon Boy Chapter 26
Name: darrena Date:8/11/2009
Comment: Wonderful chapter!!!! I loved the bonding between TIr and Tristan. Cant wait for more :)
Author's Comment:  Tristan's character has gone through a lot of changes since I first created him but I think the more relaxed version that is coming out in this recent chapter is a really great for Tir.  It makes his choice a little bit harder than if Tristan didn't want him or was cold to him.


Dragon Boy Chapter 16
Name: mousecat Date:10/6/2009
Comment: I love this story!!!
Author's Comment:  I'm really glad you are enjoying it.  I hope future chapters will be as interesting as the first ones :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 27
Name: kerryannh Date:10/8/2009
Comment: I love the new chapter. Drake is so wise. Hopefully Marek and Tir will make up/ My favorite fan art is one of Drake Marek and Tir by Vanduran. Tir is so cute.
Author's Comment:  Vanduran is such a great artist.  I was really lucky to catch her when she opened commissions.  I usually try to stick to one artist for each story but I knew that she would do such a great job with the characters I had to have her do Dragon Boy :)


Dragon Boy Chapter 27
Name: mousecat Date:10/14/2009
Comment: This story is great!!! I love every chapter!!
Author's Comment:  Thank you so much *hugs*  Although I'm a little slow to update I hope you will continue to enjoy future chapters.


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