Reviews for Black
Heaven *Due to the review service
I'm using all review must be approve before showing up. Sorry for
the inconvenience.
Chapter
1
Name: kel
Date: 6/3/2009
Comment: chapter is good The plot looks like it will
be a good read and Akito sounds good and with depth
Author's Comment: Thank you :) I'm really
excited about this story and I hope that you keep enjoying
it.
Chapter
1
Name: Enkeli
Date: 6/15/2009
Comment: I so hope this story will be continued...
Author's Comment: Yes, this story will
continue. I'm rather obsessed with it right now :P
Chapter
1
Name: graveyardstalker
Date: 7/23/2009
Comment: though disturbing in the fact that there is a
child and one that is on drugs I found myself unable and unwilling
to stop reading. Very well done! Entertaining to the Nth degree
:) This was worth the price of admission. The story seemed
flawless in the direction it flowed and though I felt I knew where
you were heading I was definetely pleased with the outcome. Again
KUDOS on the Excellent work. As long as I have eyes and you write
this well I will read whatever you put in print.
Author's Comment: I'm glad you liked this
story. Right now I'm really captivated by it myself although
it is by far my darkest piece.
Chapter
4
Name: graveyardstalker
Date: 8/18/2009
Comment: Very good writing and
you could feel their wanton desire. Good job
Author's Comment: This chapter was all
about desire. I love Jehan since he is a calm sensual
person. I've never really had a character like that and it is
very fun to write.
Chapter
1
Name: Rachel
Date: 10/15/2009
Comment: near the end i saw
this. i think you meant the legal sex droids that had become the
standard in teh sex industry. the paragraph began with He inhaled
sharply very good other wise.
Author's Comment: Thank you I went in and
change the sentence to make it easier to read and the spelling
mistake :)
